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63#7 ( " DECISIONS " )
Sitt'n here contimplat'n on the next step
I'm supposed to take, Yet my mind won't stop
anticipat'n, on who's being real and who's being
fake, It's messed-up liv'n life by two decisions,
gett'n killed or doing life in prison, there's really
no point in stress'n going in circles with no direction,
they think behind bars will teach me a lesson,
all that does is build more aggression, lucky
I don't have a Smith & Wesson the crimes
I'd commit would only have you quess'n!
So I guess I'll finish this freestyle by say'n
I'll see you guy's in awhile!
WRITTEN BY: Ricardo Hernandez
What inspired you to write this?
Living behind bars is not the life for me!
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A very interesting work. The anger and resignation are tangible. Thanks for sharing this.
Mike
your dad was quite the talent. Love the language in this poem. Voted up!
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saleheensblog 20 months ago
may his departed soul sleep in peace, it was a good work. thnx